Screenplay about the Vietnam War

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Hello all,

I recently completed my screenplay entitled "Twelve and Twenty: The Cost of Living". The story revolves around a new recruit's journey through the war - set in 1968/1969.

The US Marine Corp 2/3/3 homepage has graciously featured it on their site for your enjoyment.

I would love to hear feedback from some soldiers who were there.

If you get some free time and would like to read it, you can access it at this link:

http://www.homestead.com/233part4/Page9.html

Thank you for your time and I do hope you enjoy it
Tobias Moran
Author - Twelve and Twenty: The Cost of Living